New Reviews on Breaking Taylor!!!!!

Ok, this post is for all reviews I have gotten recently. Of course they are edited to keep the one who made them confidential.

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My initial reaction to your story is that it starts of well with us plunged straight into the action. A woman fleeing from men - men she knows by name - and another man already shot them. Clearly dangerous people. I think this providers an excellent hook to encourage the reader to discover what has happened and to eant to know what is going to happen next. I do not know if your viewpoint changes through the book yet but so far it is a first person account from the female protagonist which has the advantage of the reader being intimate with her thoughts, fears etc. Useful in the very beginning as there is no dialogue as our heroine is cowering alone in a hole. It may prove limiting overall as clearly the reader can only be aware of what Taylor sees or is told of secondhand.
I am enjoying it so far.

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These are from September 29, 2011 ---


2 comments but nicks have been removed for privacy :P

<+********8> because mischievousslave{SI}[MM] is more than just a huge perv (and that is a compliment) but also an absolutely devious writer who does an amazing job mindfucking her reader.

<+*******> it's devious how the story draws you in and you can't stop reading

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Latest comments (nick edited for privacy reasons)

<*******> 4NOT sure if you here or 4NOT sugar.. i just finished the book i absolutely LOVED it
<*********> it wasnt the scenes that brought me to tears.. it was the bttle with in herself  i could feel the emotions, and the finial was the betrayle and i couldnt stop myself..


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*********> in no way should you read anything other than encouragement or support here -- this is not criticism.
<***********> you do an amazing job laying out some of the internal dialogue of the desire for submission.
<***********> your voice on that is tremendous and powerful.

<************> the message is a big one that i think that speaks to many.


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I am trying to get all of the comments made compiled into one file. It is a task. Here are just a few that I had on hand and ready. I have removed the names of the person to protect their privacy.


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******** (01/03/2011 11:43:22 PM): I put in my adobe
turner28 (01/03/2011 11:43:25 PM): k
turner28 (01/03/2011 11:43:31 PM): all i ask is tell me how you like it
******* (01/03/2011 11:43:38 PM): ok
******** (01/03/2011 11:45:33 PM): its cute
turner28 (01/03/2011 11:45:40 PM): ? what
******** (01/03/2011 11:45:59 PM): I liked what I have read so far

******** (02/03/2011 12:16:16 AM): I like it alot

****** (02/03/2011 12:26:05 AM): I like the chapters real well an you are a good writer

****** (02/03/2011 12:35:24 AM): it reminds me of the different type of slopes we had back on the farm
turner28 (02/03/2011 12:35:35 AM): ?
******** (02/03/2011 12:36:46 AM): in one chapter the slopes were different and the same was on the farm that I was raised on
turner28 (02/03/2011 12:36:56 AM): oh lol
******* (02/03/2011 12:37:57 AM): there seems alot of fiticon to the book and it holds my atttention on reading it
turner28 (02/03/2011 12:38:25 AM):
******* (02/03/2011 12:38:45 AM): see why I like it a lot

****** (02/03/2011 1:04:41 AM): got to chapter 10 at last and it is very very good



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*********** (02/03/2011 5:24:56 AM): Congratulations on the final edit!!! This is a great book I can hardly wait for the second one!!

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******* (28/02/2011 10:44:55 PM): if the first page is any indication, I'm definitely going to like your book
******* (01/03/2011 3:37:50 PM): Yes, taken... very impressed with how you wrote them and incredibly turned on by them.
******* (01/03/2011 3:38:09 PM): Plus, overall, I really like how you treat the mental aspect of Taylor's submission

****** (01/03/2011 3:45:14 PM): well then I definitely want to read it because part 1 has been pretty intense so far

******** (01/03/2011 3:48:01 PM): I like that you write from her point of view... it's a very nice change from what I'm used to
******** (01/03/2011 9:59:55 PM): Btw, I've read through chapter 20. Chapters 19 and 20 are my favorites, they are excellent.
******* (01/03/2011 10:00:06 PM): And I'm not just blowing smoke up your ass either, I mean it.
******** (01/03/2011 10:51:23 PM): So far from what I've read, I am continually impressed by how well you explore the mental aspects of submission. I can count on one hand the number of stories I've read that capture that accurately.
******** (01/03/2011 10:52:23 PM): I'd put it this way: with the way you write about the mental aspects, reading about how Taylor is physically broken becomes more than just a description.

********** (01/03/2011 11:07:45 PM): I've been trying not to lay it on too thick and seem like a sycophant, but I have really enjoyed reading your book




wow!!!!
02/04/11 By: Anonymous
i dont even know where to begin it was such a great story!!!!! i cant wait to read wat else u have instore for her!! there were times i just wanted to cry for her, it ws such an emotional story!!!! i loved it


Great Work
01/18/11 By: **********
I loved the work,.Well written with great suspense . Hope to read more of your great work.

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Really liked it!
01/10/11 By: **************
Sure wish Taylor would get better at playing the mind games being played on her. But she's got one thing down, divide and conquer!


More than I expected....
01/10/11 By:***********8
Fantastic story with great characters and suspense. I really love how you have laid out the story line with getting glimpses of the past while driving the story forward.

My only suggestion would be to split the story up into a couple of submissions. You may loose some people with the length.

Please keep on writing and I am waiting in anticipation for your next entry.


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A Tour de Force!
01/09/11 By *********
It is difficult, if not almost impossible, to make an adequate comment on this work, but I feel I have no choice but to try.

From the dedication, which was a delight in itself, to the very last word, this incredible work of erotica held me rapt.

I cannot even begin to take individual parts to comment upon, as the whole is so much more than the sum of them, so much so that 5 *s seems pitifully inadequate as a score.

I notice, from your profile, that this is your first submission, at least under this name, to *********I find it impossible to believe that you don't have a great experience of writing, and writing at a very high level. Indeed, if it were the case that you were a new writer, we may as well pack up now and hand the Laurel to you for permanent keeping!

I have never come across a work that is described as a 'Lead in' that has run to anything remotely approaching 125 000 words. It is, in short, an amazing accomplishment, of which you and the husband you dedicated it to, should feel extremely well-satisfied.

In closing, I realise that a work of this complexity and length must have taken a considerable amount of time, but I can also, with absolute honesty, say that I await your next submission with the highest of expectations; I hope I won't have to wait too long - my twilight years are close to hand!

Thank you again, turner28; this has been a great day for ************ and its readers.



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 I left my ID in the posts because almost everyone knows mine anyway. :)


I will post more here as I get them compiled.

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New comment just came in this morn March 18, 2011





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Hi,
First thank you for the reply!Second,yes tis true I have not read your works before,but to rectify that grievous over-site,I am now in the process of reading "Breaking Taylor".I have read just over 1/4 of this story and must say I am very glad to have found you and your works.From what I have read thus far,I do greatly admire your ability to,"weave" the chapters as I call it,i.e. blending the action so that the past events are presented to the reader to explain the underpinnings behind the present action.

You mentioned you are about to be published on Amazon,any idea as to when your works will be available?Amazon is certainly in need of a writer such as yourself,as there are but a few authors that write TPE themes really well.Claire Thompson for one and
J.W. Mc Kenna being among the better ones.I also will give accolades to Kimberley Zant and Diana Philbrick,although these two write under the consensual theme,usually with the female subject voluntarily submitting themselves for compensation with some family member(s) of the female in dire financial need.

In any case,please let me know when your works will start showing up on Amazon so that I can support your very fine writings.
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